Thursday, June 20, 2013

How would you format a comment analysis article on this topic: Who is responsible for civility?There needs to be a lead, 3 paragraphs and a closing.

I think that the standard 5 paragraph essay is what you
are describing.  The first paragraph is an introduction, where you begin with a hook
asking a question or listing a statistic about your topic.   You might start with: When
did you learn the difference between right and wrong?  The idea is to set the tone for
your reader and get your reader thinking about the
topic.


Next comes a thesis, where you state in one simple
clear sentence what your essay is about.  Decide who you will argue is responsible for
civility.  You want to avoid statements of opinion like "I think" or "I believe" and
instead say something like: Parents are responsible for their children's civility.  Then
you want to list 3 clear, succinct reasons why.


Begin each
of the next three paragraphs with a transition word, such as To begin with, First, Next,
Also, In addition, and so on.  Then include a clear topic sentence with the reason for
that paragraph.  For example, your first paragraph might begin
with:



First of
all, parents are responsible for setting their children's moral
compass.



Then go on to
explain, with concrete and specific examples.  Continue this format for all three
paragraphs.  You'll want to include 2-3 examples and pieces of evidence for
each.


End your essay with a clear conclusion.  In the first
sentence, return to your hook statement by answering your question or adding to your
statistic.  Then restate your thesis statement in mostly the same words.  List your
three topic sentences from the middle paragraphs.  Finally, end with a call to action or
concluding thought to lead your reader thinking about your
essay.

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