Monday, September 14, 2015

Would you give me thesis statements for "choices and consequences"?I am writing an essay in 12th grade. My novel is No Country For Old Men. My...

As a senior in high school, it is important for you to be
able to take a generic topic and turn it into your own thesis statement.  Therefore,
rather than provide you with a thesis statement, I'll give you some steps to take so
that you can write your own.  These steps can be used with almost any essay topic or
novel.  This way, in the future, you'll be equipped to tackle writing assignments and
essay prompts on your own.


The first step in a prompt that
is this general is to turn the topic into an open-ended topic
question
.  Here are a few examples to help get you
started:



In
No Country for Old Men, what major choices does the main
character(s) make and how does it affect him/them?


What are
the (negative or positive) consequences of a major decision (choice) in the
novel?



The next step is to
brainstorm general answers to your topic question(s).  By brainstorming answers to one
of the above questions, your ideas might lead you to a better and more specific topic
question.  An example might be:


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What are the consequences of [certain choice(s)]
and how do they affect the character/outcome of the
story/reader/etc?



Notice how
each of these sample questions could lead you to a variety of answers that must be
supported by the text.  As you brainstorm different ideas, be as specific as possible
and include actual examples of what you are trying to
say.


Once you've made a long list of ideas and examples
(which will be used as evidence) narrow down your topic into one main focus.  This
means, choose a path or a direction for your essay.  Maybe you want to focus on one
choice and its many consequences.  Maybe you want to focus on a common consequence of
several bad/good choices.


If you can create a really well
written topic question, your thesis statement simply answers that question in a complete
sentence.  The thesis for your essay should be completely up to you.  It will not only
reflect what you know and understand, but when you are in control,
you have the best chance of writing a strong essay.


If
making a decision for the direction of your essay is difficult, I advise you to look at
all of your brainstormed ideas.  Which one(s) will best lead you to
three subtopics?  Keep in mind that a five paragraph essay
will need to be broken into 3 body paragraphs.  Be sure your overall focus is divisible
by three subtopics and use these subtopics as the general answer to your topic question,
and your thesis statement is complete.

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